2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch
I tried to make this video dynamic by making gestures with my arms. I also included the use of props such as an amazon box during the speech.
I tried to make this video dynamic by making gestures with my arms. I also included the use of props such as an amazon box during the speech.
Another point I made sure to improve on was good natural lighting.
I also dressed professionally for this interview.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
Although I did not complete the first pitch I sought feedback through others videos and attempted to correct mistakes others had previously made.
Wow, Travis, this is fantastic! You look very professional, I wasn't bored watching you and I'm even more interested in your product! The gestures and props definitely work, except it was a little weird when you tossed the box; I was worried you had hit something valuable. Anyways, the only critique I really have is to try and talk a little faster. There were long pauses that made me lose focus for a few seconds. Other than that, great work!
ReplyDeleteHey Travis,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your elevator pitch and thought that you were very professional in delivering your message. You did a great job logically moving through your points and describing your product. I was thoroughly entertained throughout the presentation, but some long pauses made it a little more difficult to follow. However, this was an overall great pitch.
Hey Travis,
ReplyDeleteThis was a very well thought out and detailed elevator pitch. There is no doubt that this would go over great in front of a company or a group of potential investor for your company. You looked professional and gave it your all. As you gain more and more polish the pitch will get better and better.